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nal_rene ([personal profile] nal_rene) wrote2011-08-04 09:48 am

WOOT!!! I FOUND OLD WRITING OF AWESOMENESS!!!

Wow... that's a lot of caps lock...

ANYWAY! I found some old writing. I will be posting it up here because I'm rather proud of it. This first set is a bunch of sentances I wrote while looking into the thoughts of the FFXIII Characters... I'm rather proud of the result... ESPEACIALLY MY HOPE/LIGHT THING!!!

  • On crystal clear nights, Hope thinks back to his childhood on Cocoon and can't help wanting that security for his own children. The he holds Lightning a little closer to him and knows that this is the best security he could hope for. Family. Fighting. Surviving.
  • Vanille  wasn't used to sleeping alone, but she couldn't tell Sazh that. He didn't know about Fang, about Gran Pulse, so she drew the line and went to sleep.
  • The suns gaze woke a disgruntled Hope. He pulled Lightning's warm body a little closer and buried his face in her fragrant hair. After a few moments of dozing he frowned. When had this happened. Oh shit. Lightning was going to kill him.

Yeah... you can see how much fun I had. So in chronological order it goes: Vanille, Hope sleeping, Hope pondering.

They were blips... they make me happy... I WROTE A BUNCH FOR 12 TOO!!! That comes next.

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[personal profile] lowkey 2011-08-04 08:54 pm (UTC)(link)
I can't decide if I like the second or the third one best. They're both spectacular, in different ways.
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[personal profile] lowkey 2011-08-04 09:23 pm (UTC)(link)
The third reminds me of how I write Hope, which sorta borrows alot from my own personality -- generally well meaning, gets in over his head, immediately realizes it, panics.