nal_rene | Writing Update (Reply)

I thought I'd give an update as to what kind of writing stuff I've been doing and hopefully get some input as to ideas for a fic that I really want to write. (OMG! I can write Rinoa! :o )

Challenge for No True Pair
Rinoa and Reno, Military Dress.
Third Person
Past Tense

FFVIII world post game:
Rinoa is stress because of visions. Self-Realizations. Theory about Squall.
(Basically. Squall never loved her in the first place. Even after she "won" his love. Instead, becuase she is a sorceress, her soul/power grabbed onto him thus knighting him and making him have feeling for her, but if she had never been a sorceress in the first place, then Squall would have had no reason to bother with her. I want to kinda explain more about it, but I don't know what to explain. Another point on which I need help.)
She is depressed. Loks and everyone and compares her life and progress to theirs and finds that she has been left behind in the dust. Visions get worse.
Tries to leave, but she finds that she is a prisoner. Called a guest and student and member of Garden, but she knows this to be a cover for what she really is. Trapped. Depression, frustration, and fear builds until she snaps!

FFVII World post game/post AC? (I really need to figure that out.)
Rinoa Transports her self to 7 world. Causes a rift in the univer/a gap. Major destruction in both worlds. Turks and Avalanche set off either seperatly or together to find this new menace, a new Calamaty for out of the sky, in order to destroy it. They find Rinoa. She is not recognized as the menace, so she tags along for the ride, fiegning amnesia. They resolve to help her find her memory because they know she knows something as to what happened/is happening.

After that I have no clue! I'm gonna write it up and need lots of betaing. OH! And I have no Idea where Reno is coming into play, but he kinda has to. Kinda has to be a main character too. Oh Boy

Excerpt:
"Wherever I go I am a prisoner!" Rinoa screamed tearfully, clenching her hair in her hands. She dropped to the ground and wrapped her arms about her knees. Her voice took a softer tone of regret. "Maybe this is how Ultimicia felt. Lonely. Without a home. Without people she could really trust. She was feared when she had no control. She was afraid. Being afraid is so tiring. She didn't want to have to deal with that anymore. She didn't want to have to look at the man she loved so dearly and see her own unconcious manipulation everyday.

"She didn't want to see him screw his life up for her when he had it so good and she was just complicating things. Maybe Ultimicia, feared and alone, sought to find a place where she could put the three sorceresses together and cause time compression, not to destory the universe, but change her own choices. To teach herself how to control her powers and how to rely on herself, so she didn't need a knight!"

Rinoa pounded the ground and cried, "And we destroyed her because she was trying to find happiness!"

Wherever I go I am a prisoner," She looked up at her captors with eyes blazing white. "But that doesn't mean I have to keep it that way. I will change things. I will change my life, my choices. I will be stronger." She stood and held out her hand. A gunblade materialized with a blinding flash of light. She giggled looking at her new weapon, "Won't Squall be so proud of me. I am going to free him from the chains of servitude, then win his love without that Sorceress mumbo-jumbo!"
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